My song!
I see you LORD when she looks at me
I see you LORD in her smile at peace
I know you're there in her arms
I know you're there keeping her from harm
You are the air she breaths
You are the song she sings
LORD come hear her now
LORD come hear her now
She needs you LORD to guide her way
She needs you LORD each and every day
She needs you LORD every step she takes
She needs you LORD every morning she wakes
Cause you are the air she breaths
You are the song she sings
LORD come hear her now
LORD come hear her now
I wrote this song but I don't know if the lyrics are good or not. Tell me what you think!
I see you LORD in her smile at peace
I know you're there in her arms
I know you're there keeping her from harm
You are the air she breaths
You are the song she sings
LORD come hear her now
LORD come hear her now
She needs you LORD to guide her way
She needs you LORD each and every day
She needs you LORD every step she takes
She needs you LORD every morning she wakes
Cause you are the air she breaths
You are the song she sings
LORD come hear her now
LORD come hear her now
I wrote this song but I don't know if the lyrics are good or not. Tell me what you think!
posted by .:Alix:. at 1:15 PM
1 Comments:
Hmmmm...
The lyrics are very poetic, a nice touch in today's world of "vain repetition" in music.
I'm wondering about the "she" and "her" in the song and how they work together; it's a bit ambiguous, but if that's the way you meant it, don't change anything.
Look forward to seeing it put to music!
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